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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Charlee Burgandy and The Sword of Rejaeym

    Okay, um first off is how you say the sword's name. It's ray-jay-um. I know weird. And second this is something I came up with during the school year. Enjoy! ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Transylvania

    I like it. Different indeed, but in a good way ;). I really like how you didn't exactly say that they were vampires, but instead we had to keep reading ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Light and Darkness

    Interesting. I liked how you put the form of Light and Darkness into Bulls. Original and really cool. I give you mega poits for being orirginal. Spelling mistakes here and ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Dragon.

    Interesting indeed. You should add onto this and make more than just this one. Since Vray was talking about his human eating cousin, you should make it into a story ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Death and His Apprentice

    Well... I liked it. I really did, but the fact that there was no background on the apprentice I was lost. And I wanted to know why Death even had ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Circle of Chairs

    Creepy creepy! Super duper interesting!!!! I was like glued to the screen when I was reading it. At first I thought, 'oh great just some boring story' well after I ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Chronicles of Rein (place holder title)

    Very, very interesting. I liked, but then again I like stories that involve these kinds of story plots. You will become a very good writer if you keep it up. ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The City of Elementals, Chapter 1

    I don't really understand what's going on here. It's clear that the girl is writing a book, but then again is that just her made up story or is it ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forbidden Love

    I like it, but it was really short. Try to make it longer and add tons of detail. Detail, detail, detail that's going to make your story longer and attract ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Vamyre Hunter

    Liked it a lot! Finally there is a story where the girl kills the vampire. Thank you for doing that. :D

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Beginnning of Untitled

    Perty good!! And yes 'pretty' was misspelled intentionally. :D

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Draco's first Murder!

    I really liked it. I also feel that Draco is just a good guy in a bad spot. This is a great sweet story.

    Sep 28, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Amy Lynn and Matt

    *Dream* "Matt! Matt please don't leave. Please." Amy Lynn pleaded with her boyfriend. She didn't want Matt to leave her, but he had to. It was for the sake of ...

    Sep 28, 2010


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