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Re: Charlee Burgandy and The Sword of Rejaeym
Okay, um first off is how you say the sword's name. It's ray-jay-um. I know weird. And second this is something I came up with during the school year. Enjoy! ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Transylvania
I like it. Different indeed, but in a good way ;). I really like how you didn't exactly say that they were vampires, but instead we had to keep reading ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Light and Darkness
Interesting. I liked how you put the form of Light and Darkness into Bulls. Original and really cool. I give you mega poits for being orirginal. Spelling mistakes here and ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: The Dragon.
Interesting indeed. You should add onto this and make more than just this one. Since Vray was talking about his human eating cousin, you should make it into a story ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: Death and His Apprentice
Well... I liked it. I really did, but the fact that there was no background on the apprentice I was lost. And I wanted to know why Death even had ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: The Circle of Chairs
Creepy creepy! Super duper interesting!!!! I was like glued to the screen when I was reading it. At first I thought, 'oh great just some boring story' well after I ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: The Chronicles of Rein (place holder title)
Very, very interesting. I liked, but then again I like stories that involve these kinds of story plots. You will become a very good writer if you keep it up. ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: The City of Elementals, Chapter 1
I don't really understand what's going on here. It's clear that the girl is writing a book, but then again is that just her made up story or is it ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: Forbidden Love
I like it, but it was really short. Try to make it longer and add tons of detail. Detail, detail, detail that's going to make your story longer and attract ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: The Vamyre Hunter
Liked it a lot! Finally there is a story where the girl kills the vampire. Thank you for doing that. :D
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Beginnning of Untitled
Perty good!! And yes 'pretty' was misspelled intentionally. :D
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Draco's first Murder!
I really liked it. I also feel that Draco is just a good guy in a bad spot. This is a great sweet story.
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: Amy Lynn and Matt
*Dream* "Matt! Matt please don't leave. Please." Amy Lynn pleaded with her boyfriend. She didn't want Matt to leave her, but he had to. It was for the sake of ...
Sep 28, 2010
