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Umm I like it but it went way to fast for me and it could've been longer, in my opinion. Another thing is that caught my attention is that Kiara's ...

This was really interesting. I liked the whole dream inside of a dream kinda feeling. :) I very much enjoyed it. The only things I saw were some choppy sentences, ...

I really liked your story :) It was very interesting. I hope you won.

Aha I love this story. :) I though it was very good, but there were just a few things wrong. Nothing big, just that there was a few spelling errors. ...

This is a fan-fic about Jack Barakat. I would just like to say I DO NOT own Jack, All Time Low, or Kara. I ONLY own my character Ebony Ridges. ...

Name: Georgie Decamshyre God parent: Hades (if I can have that) Human parent: Dalila Decamshyre Age : 16 Personality : Nice at times, can be hateful and cold. Likes to ...

Spell check please! I really dn't like reading stories were the authors shorten words. So please use 'you' instead of 'u'. And secondly don't 'n' just take the extra two ...

Quick intro to the characters. His name is Vlad Decamshyre (De-cam-shy-er) He is a vampire, he is 1200 years old but only looks like he's 20. Vlad is in line ...

I liked it I really did. The main thing that caught me was "Annabeth and I were supposed to be scouting out two more half bloods and pulling him from ...

Wow! This a very powerful piece in my opioun. I love how you made this woman seem so small and weak in Ross's mind, but in reality she is a ...

Wow I loved this story. It's a really great idea that you have going on. You had me captivated the entire time. I liked how you described almost everything in ...

Um.... Is Blake a he or she? And um I'm personally confused about this piece. What's going on? I get that they're in a lair and a beast is looking ...

These are reallyshort. If this is about Aphrodite then why are talking about Persephone and Demeter? You should make these things longer and packed with details! Everything needs a little ...

This was really interesting. I've never really reviewed poetry before, but this.... This was amazing! Interesting. I had to re-read just to understand it, and that means you've caught my ...

Wow. I loved loved loved it!!! It was very moving and not much needs to be changed. Overall it was moving and inspirational. Good job keep writing.