Delirium

Thank you so much for the review and all of the compliments :) Also, thanks for following! And yes, I like to refer to use birds and the idea of ...

Thank you so much for the compliments :) You are correct. And yes the oceans symbolize not only tears but the color of my-er..her eyes. Blue. I agree the ending ...

Wow..you're spot-on. Good job :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for the compliments :) xx- Delirium

Thank you so very much for the compliments :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. xx- Delirium

Thank you for the suggestions. I did not make any references to a god/Jesus, but I like that you may have interpretted it that way :) Thank you for the ...

Thank you :)

Thank you so very much for the kind words :) xx- Delirium

Yes. We had finished Dante's "Inferno", and were told to write about one person we wished to send to Hell and which circle, lowest, they qualified to be punished in. ...

Thank you. :) It was an assignment for my English class. We had to write about one person we wished to send to Hell. Italics is one of my favorite ...

Thank you so very much. :) I try to avoid the cliche rhyming schemes used by many, as I feel they are limiting. xx- Delirium

Thank you very much for the kind words and criticism. :) I understand what you mean, it didn't quite achieve what I had hoped it to, but nonetheless I am ...

Thank you :)

Thank you so very much. :) I generally try to avoid rhyming schemes, as I am not too fond of the strict line after line rhymes. I prefer to use ...

Thank you so very, very much dear friend! I'm so glad to have such an amazing critique of my work. Reading this has brought me much pride, and I was ...

Thankyou very much, your review has made me a very happy writer. Free verse tends to be my niche. In the original writing of this I had spaces between lines ...