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YEAH STEGGY! Thanks for the review though! I'll make the changes soon. :D

No problem!

Thanks for the review!

Thank you! I will go back, makes changes and tag you when I publish the second chapter! And I plan on adding lots more foreshadowing in the future!

Thanks! I will go back and makes changes. When the next chapter comes out I will tag you.

Much welcomes!

Sure!

Thank you for telling me this and will keep it mind when I review!

This speaks to me on so many levels! I love the wording as well, it explains situations like this quite well.