DeepCrystal

What I saw as comedic, or funny in a softer term, is the whole tone of this poem. As I said in my comment above, I mentioned how this seemed ...

Thank you for the review. Sorry about all the errors. While this isn't the first to pop up in my portfolio, it was my first story that I ever started ...

Thank you for your comments, Magenta. I saw what you said about "vampiric knowledge" and I will tell you that I meant to say what I said to describe her ...