Deathcurrent

I like it, though it was a little longer than I normally like. I recommend, in the future, to try for a shorter one. If this is your style though, ...

Oh wow! I have a really great picture in my head. Amazing imagery and voice. Keep it up! I like the last line the best. Are you going to write ...

It definitely goes with the French Revolution. The intro is my favorite as well. I like it! I'm going to add it. Keep up the amazing poems.

Please let me know how it is! I'd appreciate feedback before I get too far. :) NOTE: Reaper's name will be changing! I just haven't found a good name yet. ...

Prologue I’m Victoria Stake and I’m a Naiad, or a water elf in simpler terms. I’m having one of the worst days in my one thousand five hundred thirty-one years ...

That's deep. I like it a lot, and I might think about asking you if I could use a similar version, or this one if it's okay with you in ...

I like it. A lot, I'm big into these types of fantasy and you've done a fabulous job with this chapter. I just have one thing, at the beginning, you ...

Wow! That was freaky, but really good. I like how "the stalker" could be a person, or another thing entirely. It gives a dimension of freedom to the reader. Though ...

That's sad but beautiful. I hope that this was written with good intentions, because the end sounds a little on the harsh side. Don't forget them! Just let the memories ...

May I join? Demon school sounds like fun. :D

NICE! I can't wait to read the next chapter. At one point, when the daughter is asking her father something, it gets a little confusing. May want to take a ...