Deanie

Thank you! Now I see how that needs a lot more cleaning up. In the spirit of the story, I mean the way I've written it I think I need ...

Thank you

Thanks so much for the great review :) Ellipses, they're supposed to be so simple but they're so complicated! I think marvelling is like that but my spell check is ...

Thanks Iggy :) Yeah, I should really re-mention the whole Spirit thing. I think they might be encountering the elves again in the next bit too because they aren't far ...

Oh yes I see what you mean! Thank you for reviewing, and I will definitely edit that :)

I know I'm so bad at writing this quickly! Yeah, I think maybe it is getting too same-y with Ben always saving her, I should mix it up. I'm writing ...

Awh thanks Iggy! I will continue trying to keep Ben's thoughts and feelings in there just as much as Maria's. :)

This is too good I can't even.

D: I didn't know more was posted yet!!! You are an amazing writer, you know

Point of view of the characters? Great idea. I really, really liked reading this, and although it was more to show character in a narrative voice, it does tell a ...

Yeah I know, I know, I'm posting this super slowly xD Inspiration is slow. And I just realized how un-Christmassy this story has become DDD: There will be more Christmas ...

This is more intended for nine year olds or perhaps younger, and really the only underlying theme is being with your family for Christmas and what some people would do ...

Thanks again ;)

All my annoying typos revealed... thanks again!

Thank you!