Deanie

^ That was my initial reaction. My real one is this: Thanks again for another review

Ah, how I laugh when you call wonderful reviews like these short and shabby. And it makes me very happy that you only ship them from time to time. That's ...

Two reviews in one day? And you have done another today as well. We're getting spoiled over here :P

Okay. YWS is pretty behind when it comes to this novel, and it gets worse xD But uhm, I am going to try and put more beautiful and uplifting moments ...

Thanks for the review Timmy. Honestly, it means a lot to have someone following this novel for such a long time ;.; Yes, these are all things that really do ...

YAY YOU ARE ALL CAUGHT UP congrats ^.^ And as always, thank you ^.^ The problem with the smoking is that she should've been doing her duty and been with ...

Aaargh passive voice is so difficultttt I am going to get better at it :3 Point it out when it is there in the future. Well, if it is there. ...

Ah, I see my mistakes. Oh, and this was a lot of helpful feedback, even if you did get muddled at a point. Thanks for coming back to my novel

You always come up with some pretty smart points. In the editing, I will definitely be having a mention of it going up. I couldn't let Tammy go on her ...

I am going to find ways to make this more test like, yes. And ease back into reviewing. Take your time :)

That's actually some really useful feedback. I do feel like at the beginning there are some scenes which seem too cinematic and this is probably one of them. I will ...

I will work on those setting description! It's actually something I have heard before so I know it needs some work.

Thanks for the review Tate! Very helpful :)

Thanks so much for the review! I will work on incorporating some more description into places.

Thanks so much for loyally continuing to read this. Your feedback is always such a help :)