Deanie

Thank you for the review! Yeah I know, I need to work on a title but I couldn't think of much else xD

"I've never been happier to get punched in the face."

Agh the sentence correction was what I really meant. And um, I misspelled shirt so it looked like short xD Yep, women are not to be trusted at all costs ...

Pls. Please can you move here and be my creative writing teachers. You're so good at commenting on plot and stuff, you keep me thinking and researching, I love it

I thought you would fix all my sentences :) Thank you for this so much

Thank you Penlorde!

Thanks Addie!

I will work on the emotion and try and make it more realistic! Argh those commas again >>

Thanks Iggy!

Thanks for the review Hameedat ^^

*seconds that* I miss your awesome writing Gold...

... I think you just boosted this chapters self confidence ;) Your reviews are amazing Timmy how can I ever repay you? D:

You are so kind c: Thank you

This was so helpful ;) Y'know, it's because of Sweetie and her asthma xD Thank you Timmy :D

Awh thank you :') You're so nice!