Deanie

Short and sweet... riiiight xD

Thanks for the wonderful review Fortis. I shall definitely keep the three c's in mind when I edit it ^.^

You don't know how excited I was when I saw you'd written a review

I know I did cheat a little there, but I wanted it to go from a little girl to an older one by the end of the poem :) Thanks ...

You should definitely stop reviewing all my stuff because I am starting to feel very spoiled. And I haven't been reviewing myself lately so I am VERY spoiled Ah, sorry ...

Thanks Timmy. This one was a little bit rushed, so I do think I need to put some more time into getting this one right. I am going to edit ...

It was still a brilliant review Timmeh. I will make those edits you suggested!

I am glad you liked it Pretzel! I will try making this one longer and ease out the pace by explaining some of things you wanted to see and adding ...

I shall try and work on making the message clearer when I go on to edit this one. Thanks for the le review Timmster

Thanks for the review Timmy

Thanks for the review Timmy

Oh no, this is the period of poetry where I was trying /way/ too hard xD Uhm, I don't know which I would choose, really? I need them both in ...

I will definitely ping you ;) I know, I know, this wasn't my best writing :( It was when I looked at this the next day I realised the story ...

Thanks for the review! And I think the beginning needs more backstory and all, because so many things unexplained DD: Her pettiness was all explained in my head, but I ...