Deanie

I like the sound or artificial flavours! I will be editing this soon :3 Thank you

hehe. This is as fabulous as always! but you might be more careful from here on out.” I feel like the words 'want to' should be between might and be. ...

Nope, no oxymoron, I am just not a very sciencey person xD What would be the right term to use?

Aww Thanks Kam :') Yes, I better go and fix that title...

Hi Blue! Loving this! Just a small note here: I see the word 'shriek' way to much in this chapter. It started to stand out a bit, and even though ...

Nooo you no dunce It's okay, I don't think many people understood what I was doing ^^ Any yet, your review is still useful ^^

I don't even have anything to say. You've been editing this to perfection

Hey you're at 200 reviews! Congrats ;) Of course I won't

Your reviews are always helpful! And you are revising my revised chapters, so they should be hard to review (uhm, hopefully so!) Thanks for these nitpicks...

Thanks so much for this Megs

Helpful review ^^ Thank you!

Hehe what a lovely sense of awkwardness you have. I thank you very much for it :D

D: How comes I didn't get a notification for this review? This was super helpful

Hi Blue! Tiriel? This is definitely a new addition! I do hope we get to know more about whoever this Tiriel is because I am curious now ^.^ She glared ...