Deanie

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!

Argh, the typos >.> And it looks like I have some inconsistencies rearing their ugly heads! Gotta neaten this chapter up a lot. Thanks Pretzel

Yeah, this chapter did seem to fill a lot of things. Thanks for the review, and I will work on things mentioned!

Thanks so much for this review Pretzel

More. More please.

Hey Mephis! I love reading your writing. Honestly, you're work is one of my favourite YWS writers things to read. And this is no exception. I have a few minor ...

Thanks Pretzel! The first point is very true, and I didn't think of it O.o I get a lot of questions about where the money is going to come from, ...

Thanks Pretzel! Honestly, following my novels makes me eternally grateful. I will definitely try to match up Tamara's thoughts and feelings more... I hope they are better in the later ...

... This sounds like a good idea. I like it. Might take me a while to edit and figure out the things, but I will. After writing of course :3

Thanks for the review Savvy!

Okay ;) But we're never gonna agree on those sentences... I am hereee all day-ish now. Just sitting around.

Thanks Widdershins! I will work on making the meaning of the poem more evident. And I do think I got the wrong word >>

It was very useful, and thank you so much. I think this is my favourite review of yours I have received yet :) Thanks for always reading my mess of ...