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Deanie

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Dodge Me 1.1

    I haven't given up on the fairytale novel! I wrote the first 50k of it for Nanowrimo and basically only broke the surface of the novel so I know it ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Tick for Yes, Cross for No

    Thanks so much for the review! Good points. When I edit, I'll change some of these things

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Dodge Me 1.1

    It's a bit of a stereotypical novel. It's more so for fun then anything else but it will get unique a bit later down the line I hope. Thanks for ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Two Punched Holes

    Thanks for the review Blue! I know this one needs a lot of work so I'm going to edit it when I have more time

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Tick for Yes, Cross for No

    Thanks for reviewing!

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Tick for Yes, Cross for No

    Aww

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Tick for Yes, Cross for No

    Thanks Pickle! I did want to relate the idea of feeling lost in life and there being no order to then having a hard time finding their identity because of ...

    Jan 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Two Punched Holes

    I do want to keep this to a short story, so I'm okay with it not being too unique. I think I need to make it clear that the fear ...

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Two Punched Holes

    As always, your reviews are drops of gold! This was pretty rough but I am gonna work on it. Thanks for the editing advice. I'll hop to it

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Two Punched Holes

    Thanks for reading and commenting!

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 2.1, The Name Game

    Oh okay! At one point you used it and said milady, so I just got a tad confused :3

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: To Turn a Spark Into a Forest Fire

    I think I like this title more!

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Other Re: Perceivable Infinities

    I will work on it! I have read that short story and I didn't even consider the similarity to it until you mentioned it DD: I think I should give ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: R.I.P (We all fall sometimes)

    Thank you for reviewing this! I didn't know I had changed the quotations, and switched person at one point. I'll fix that ^.^

    Nov 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: R.I.P (We all fall sometimes)

    Nov 12, 2015


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