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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapters 3-4 (Revised)

    Heya Blue! Hehe this is going to get interesting. I want to know why a hellhound had decided to chase Conrad! And I'm so curious to find out what's in ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapter 1 (Revised)

    Hey Blue! Yes, yes I am finally here... I know it took me a while *hides* And even now that I am here this review is going to be pretty ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Eighteen, Part Two

    Hi Lucrezia! I did not know it was you who wrote the evolution of princesses things. I thought it was Elinor Brynn because it's likely of her to have that ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Eighteen, Part One

    Hi Lucrezia, Reading this now, I realize maybe it's best that you didn't tell us what happened in the house when it was burning down. It makes this explanation a ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Seventeen

    I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW EEEEET! Just sayin' I'm so pleased it was Durriken :D This makes the story so interesting. From the sound of things he ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fifteen, Part Four

    Hello again :3 I am going to be absolutely honest here. I was a bit disappointed in this chapter. I know it's because Sirena doesn't like dwelling on the past ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fifteen, Part Three

    Heya Lucrezia Reading this made me all the more sure that Durriken is behind the rebellion. I'm not sure how he would come back from the dead, but if anyone ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fifteen, Part Two

    Hey Lucrezia! I'm sorry I keep doing the disappearing act on you... but life is kind of getting the better over me lately. Anyways, to the story! :'( This was ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fifteen, Part One

    Hey Lucrezia! Sorry I kind of disappeared for a while... I had some other chapters and stuff I needed to review as well. But I'm back for some more vampire ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Chapter 4

    Heya Kman! I'm here to read the next chapter. Okay, so this was a lot longer and it didn't have the usual action your chapters have in it. Which is ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hawk's Eye - Chapter Five; part 2/2 Scrapped

    Hey Dory! Yayy! I didn't have to wait all the until May. Which is just as well seeing as I'm not the most patient person in the world :) It ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Chapter 3

    Heya Kman! I didn't know more chapters were up! Sorry I'm so late! But I'm here now anyways ;) So I'm going to start with some nitpicks. Actually before that, ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter Three

    Heya Knightteen, Now I know what I should be looking out for every Sunday. This is going to be a lot of fun to read. I really really like this ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Never Ending Darkness (title pending) - Chapter One

    Heya Shady :) Well, this was a very good beginning! Your descriptiveness is always tip top... I don't know how you do it. And when you describe Kyanna's hand after ...

    Mar 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Chapter Fourteen

    Hello Lucrezia! What a turn of events in this chapter. Now Sirena knows how she was used, how Francois used love to gain access to her powers. How that now ...

    Mar 9, 2014


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