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Re: The Kiss
Interesting. I like how the boys are really close friends that after a little blow up the bond again very quickly. Reminds me of my arguments with my older sister ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Thou Art is needed; Thou Art Shall Be There
I really liked this poem. It was nice and romantic and sweet. I liked the title a lot, it made me really want to read the poem. Using old english ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: You, Are Anything, Everything, Never Nothing.
I really like this poem because it was short, simple and very inspiring. I like the beginning, and the last line was very touching. I liked how you listed all ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 4
Hi Blue! I would like to say I think you did put enough description in, I really liked this chapter. It was nice to learn a little bit more about ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Lady Death Cover
Hello awesome socks! I want to say, I really love this picture. I think you did a really good job. I can only think of a few things to critique ...
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Beauty and The Beast
I liked this version of Beauty and the Beasts. It was really original and very interesting. I liked how you put it in the time of the Minotaur and how ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Stormy Blue Skies
I liked this poem. It was really nice, the comparison between the two skies. The bad and good. I liked the use of metaphors you had in there. I think ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Flying
I think you did a pretty good job actually. It was nice to read. It showed how much a connect Peanut and the rider had made. The opening verse was ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Jane Doe
Hi! I've never heard of anything like this. I found this poem really interesting. I could see how you thought it could possibly be a song, but I think it ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Faynt
Wow this looks amazing can I say. The colours must've taken ages and all. I don't think the legs look strange, maybe a bit short. But it looks like Faynt ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: No Matter What
I loved this writing ever so much! Romantic stories might not be your style, but I loved it. I loved the whole idea that she never talks and all. I ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Ode To My Girlfriends Fish
Hey. This was a nice poem and liked reading it. I wasn't sure if I would get it because I didn't know what ode meant but in the end I ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: A Cat In The Attic
Hi Calli I found this a really sweet story. It really does sound like something a little kid would do. I love how at the end the she found out ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: The Shed
Okay, I am probably going to sound very harsh, but I seriously don't mean to. I didn't finish this. I read the beginning and if the beginning doesn't somehow grip ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Spinning between a rock and a hard place
Hello, Before I start reviewing I would just like to say, I love your username! It sounds really cool. Secondly, now I shall start reviewing. It took me a while ...
Sep 28, 2011
