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Deanie

Deanie

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Kiss

    Interesting. I like how the boys are really close friends that after a little blow up the bond again very quickly. Reminds me of my arguments with my older sister ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Thou Art is needed; Thou Art Shall Be There

    I really liked this poem. It was nice and romantic and sweet. I liked the title a lot, it made me really want to read the poem. Using old english ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: You, Are Anything, Everything, Never Nothing.

    I really like this poem because it was short, simple and very inspiring. I like the beginning, and the last line was very touching. I liked how you listed all ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 4

    Hi Blue! I would like to say I think you did put enough description in, I really liked this chapter. It was nice to learn a little bit more about ...

    Oct 12, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Lady Death Cover

    Hello awesome socks! I want to say, I really love this picture. I think you did a really good job. I can only think of a few things to critique ...

    Oct 7, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Beauty and The Beast

    I liked this version of Beauty and the Beasts. It was really original and very interesting. I liked how you put it in the time of the Minotaur and how ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Stormy Blue Skies

    I liked this poem. It was really nice, the comparison between the two skies. The bad and good. I liked the use of metaphors you had in there. I think ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Flying

    I think you did a pretty good job actually. It was nice to read. It showed how much a connect Peanut and the rider had made. The opening verse was ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Jane Doe

    Hi! I've never heard of anything like this. I found this poem really interesting. I could see how you thought it could possibly be a song, but I think it ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Faynt

    Wow this looks amazing can I say. The colours must've taken ages and all. I don't think the legs look strange, maybe a bit short. But it looks like Faynt ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: No Matter What

    I loved this writing ever so much! Romantic stories might not be your style, but I loved it. I loved the whole idea that she never talks and all. I ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Ode To My Girlfriends Fish

    Hey. This was a nice poem and liked reading it. I wasn't sure if I would get it because I didn't know what ode meant but in the end I ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Cat In The Attic

    Hi Calli I found this a really sweet story. It really does sound like something a little kid would do. I love how at the end the she found out ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Shed

    Okay, I am probably going to sound very harsh, but I seriously don't mean to. I didn't finish this. I read the beginning and if the beginning doesn't somehow grip ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Spinning between a rock and a hard place

    Hello, Before I start reviewing I would just like to say, I love your username! It sounds really cool. Secondly, now I shall start reviewing. It took me a while ...

    Sep 28, 2011


A man hears what he wants to hear and disregards the rest.
— Paul Simon