Deanie

Hi Abid I would just like to say you have a really great poem there. It was long, but it was worth taking the time to read through it. Your ...

Well, hello That was a really nice poem. It was light and happy. The rhyming was brilliant. It kept with the flow, didn't seem out of place to much and ...

Hi! I don't mean to sound harsh, at all. What I am going to say is just so you can improve on your writing. Okay, I read this and it ...

Wow. This poem has so many deep emotions and feelings in it, that it leaves the reader absolutely speechless! It is terrible to think that someone has had to endure ...

Hiya Angel! I liked this poem. It wasn't too long or too short. It wasn't to confusing or complicated. It was a reasonable length and nice and simple. I liked ...

Hey! I think you have a really great talent for drawing. I cannot see anything that looked wrong or awkward but I am just going to share what I think ...

I liked this poem a lot. It was so deep and sad that I felt like crying. It is sad to know you have never een able to write poetry ...

A very magical poem there. I loved the title. I was really interested by just seeing what this poem is called. I am slightly confused by the meaning of the ...

Very nice poem. The title made me nice and interesting. It was great how you started with a question which will immediately get the reader intent and listening out for ...

I liked this poem. Although it was short, it was a very deep and interesting poem. I loved the first verse. You had such great description going on there. It ...

I woke up to the faint sound of the roosters crowing. I sighed to myself and swung my legs out of bed. I gruffly stood up. I changed from my ...

Excitement. It fizzed through my veins. Each member of our family was positioned in their own corner of the living room surrounded by brightly coloured presents. Each present was delicately ...

This poem kind of has three parts to it. Part one starts here: One hates to love One loves to hate The two of them relate. Nice rhyming scheme. I ...

Great poem. The title really made me interested. Your real good with titles. I liked how you kept repeating your main line, be not my world. I loved the last ...

Wow. This poem was great. I was really interested in the title. It was so sudden and tragic when the bleachers collapsed. Really sad. And I loved how you ended ...