Deanie

Hello! :) I agree with Gee. I think you can call yourself a poet because you write wonderfully. It isn't too complicated or confusing. You write nice and simply, and ...

Hi! Well I really liked this poem. The layout was weird but I think it displays how people think when they are desperate. They don't think straight (or sometimes they ...

Heya Dogs I am not very sure this review will be of any use to you. I just wanted to let you know that this poem is epic. I love ...

Hi Cailey! Let me just say this poem was great! The rhyming scheme was perfect and flowed really well. I like reading the original and comparing it to yours. The ...

I can feel it, near me, without seeing it. It’s pulling me towards it on a string. I run, I hide, but there is no escape. It‘s slowly luring me ...

Heya Blue! I liked this version just as much as I like the previous one. I loved your opening line. It was like a warning to the reader that something ...

Big sis! Here is the review you have been waiting for... er... I hope its of some use! Well I love how you started this second chapter. It's more introducing. ...

Hi murtuza! I love this poem to bits. I am highly envious of your rhyming abilities. And I love your story about how destiny and fate are two different things. ...

Big sis!!!! Well, I was really happy reading this. There are no grammar mistakes as far as I can see! I said your english is improving! And if I didn't ...

My little sister (who is so sweet) asked me the 5 W and how questions about love. I didn't have a proper answer so I ended up writing a poem ...

Hi Zaid I really loved your poem. The title matched it well. Your opening lines made me very eager to continue read and your last line summed everything up perfectly. ...

Well I quickly wrote this poem so I am not sure if it makes any sense to anyone. Including me. Open to all comments/criticism. A particle is a particle. It ...

H delicacy! Okay, so I don't usually read plays but this was very good. I learnt a lot about the characters and understood your background. There are only a few ...

Hiya! I really liked this poem. It is really nice and has an okayish flow. I get your emotions behind this poem and I understand what you are trying to ...

Hi Shiney!!!! I love this pixel! Its so cuteeeee!!!!!! I always wondered how you make those? I think the shading looks good and I love the idea of a live ...