Deanie

Hi angel! I am going to be pacific and pick out any nitpicks I can find. But first off about the story. I found the story very the beginning you ...

Adriana! I love this chapter... It's made me all so suspicious as to what the deal was. I wonder how it will affect Edward and Guinevere's relationship. Ooh I am ...

Hey Murtuza! :) I love the song The Piano Man and I think you did a great job for it. The poem was really nice and I could easily imagine ...

JABBERRRRRRRR! Well hi! I'm not sure you'll ever get this comment because its the last of many. I know you wrote this poem years ago... but thats just what I ...

Hi! Very quick comment here - I just really loved this poem. It doesn't give to much detail on what happened to corrupt the love or whatever, but it shows ...

Hi ajt! I really loved this poem. It was so nice to know the story behind it... and this is so cute! I don't have any criticism except it was ...

Hello! Well I liked all the poems. I almost immediately noticed they were all linked up in a way. It was nice to read it as one long poem and ...

Heya aj! I loved this poem. It was very clear and the poem was straight to the point. It was very easy to understand that the topic was pollution. And ...

Love hit me so fast, I didn’t even notice it. I was too wrapped up in my past, That I missed out on the present. I focused on my work, ...

I am alone. Sulking in despair, Rotting inside and out, Numb and brain-dead. I cling to my memories, Of when the world was colourful, Not black and white. I was ...

Hi Lily. I can really understand this poem. Its very easy to relate to. I like the opening. It really quickly draws me into the poem and makes me an ...

Hello mello! Well I love this poem. It's true. People knock you down again and again in life, all you can do is stand up and do it all again. ...

hi glitter Well this poem was beautifully written but its terribly sad. I felt so much pity welling up in my heart it was unbelievable. But I liked it... no ...

Hello Well, I think the title love doesn't suite this limerick much. I think there may be a better title but I can't think of it. I feel kind of ...

Life is a running race. Sometimes the track is long, Sometimes the track is short, Sometimes the run is easy, Sometimes the run is hard. Occasionally there will be obstacles, ...