Deanie

Hi there! I really liked your poem. I could just feel the loneliness oozing out of it. You made a coupe of mistakes which I am going to nitpick: A ...

Hi! I liked this. It had a good flow to it, and you must have really vivid dreams to be able to write it out so detailed. (Or maybe you ...

Hi Noelle! You give such honest reviews on my works so I decided it is by far time I review you! Well I know this is one of your first ...

Hey creativity! I really like this poem. It is very easy to relate to and very true. Music is freedom and I don't think anyone knows or will know why ...

Hi liqqy! I really liked this short nice poem... It described how someone looks and you really described it nicely... I only have one little problem with this: Worthy for ...

Hi Lauren! I really liked this work! It had beautiful metaphors and wonderful description which painted imagery in my mind. But the thing is, I think I understand this poem. ...

I don't know what a siren is but it was a beautiful picture anyways. I get the impression that a siren is elfish .... :S Anyways not sure about that. ...

Hi Isha! I understand that this poem is a bit old, and it was one of your first. I really like it though. It seems pretty much perfect to me ...

Hi Anwesha! I loved this poem. It was short, simple and sweet. The title fitted the poem perfectly. The rhyme was controlled and flowed very well without any bumps in ...

Hi there! Well I just wanted to say I really loved your poem. It was a nice poem, with the questions being asked to the reader. I liked how you ...

Bubbly! I think this poem is nice. It's short and simple and gives a basic (but I'm a little unsure) meaning to it. First of all - I can see ...

Hi Gee! I loved this poem. I'm learning Spanish at the moment and was basically over the moon when I realised I was able to understand some bits of it. ...

Hi I really like this poem. It was really sweet and matched the title well. The story was beautiful and you have some lovely metaphors and language jammed in there. ...

Hi Venture! I really liked this poem. It was entrancing, and although the poem seemed dark and very deep it showed clear emotions. I can't say much about it except ...

Well, I have been on YWS since June 23rd. I have to say a big thanks to my sister, who introduced me to this site even though she is too ...