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Re: Untitled
Hi there! This poem was really deep and got your emotions across very clearly. As for title I would suggest: You'll never understand or My Drug. Well, what I didn't ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Well this poem seems a bit depressing if I read over it but I wrote it at the end of a bad day so... I'm not sure if it's too ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S.
Muffins!
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: White Granite
Hi there! I'm a big fan of Martin Luther Kind, and I am really happy because we are studying him at the moment in History. I think your poem is ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Chips
Hi Stella! I find it so awesome that you wrote about food! Especially chips. The way you wrote it left me drooling for the Christmas Holidays so I can go ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: assorted poems
SPARKY!
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Bluebird
Hi Snoink! I know this poem has a lot of reviews but I couldn't help myself and I'm sure one more doesn't a matter. This poem had such a wonderful ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Toxic Tongues
Hi dogs! It's far by my turn to review something for you so here I am. Just like Bubbly (HPR) I am not really meant to be reading this, but ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Fragments
Hey there Scarli! :) *digs up old poetry* Okay so I found this was a very interesting poem. The first stanza was really interesting and I really wanted more but ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: It's okay to cry
QARA QUEEN! + sister! I loved this little poem! It was really short, but I think writing short poems is a test. It's like trying to find out how much ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Invisible tears
I liked this! But you do need to add more. This is not the amazing review I promised you XD thats coming soon. My advice: more! Deanie x
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Rainbows
Hi persy! I love this poem to bits! It was so clever how you tied in the colours to demonstrate times, memories, feelings. It was such an enjoyable read. I ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Hi! I think I half get this. I understand this person killed someone and feels terrible about it. I didn't get much more than that. But shoving aside the meaning, ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Limerick 2
Hi barefoot! Haha :D This was so funny and enjoyable! Even after I read it I went about the whole house, spreading it to my family so they could chuckle ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Beautiful Baby
Hi Overeasy! I really liked this poem. The random capitalizations don't really both me because it makes the Beautiful Baby seem like the name of the baby. (Cute picture by ...
Dec 8, 2011