Deanie

Hi There! I really liked these two poems. They were really different to most things I read. I really like the title :) I think I see how it relates ...

Hi there :) This poem was really great. The detail is very inspiring and I could picture everything you were saying. Your rhyme was really smooth and blended right in. ...

I wanna join!

It's good. Looks perfect to me and I don't feel like I can help you improve somehow on this. Deanie x

Hi Gamergirl I just wanted to say I really liked your drawing. It was really nice, but I only didn't like one thing. The top. If you look closely around ...

Hi Skye! I really liked this! I've never read a poem in the form of a sort of diary so it was really interesting. The rhyme and rhythm flowed well ...

Hi! First off, a big welcome to YWS! I really loved this poem. It was really sad and sweet but it wasn't too exaggerated. I think my favourite bit was ...

QARA QUEEN + sister! This is really different from your other super short poem. I liked this one a lot more :) Mainly because it was abbit longer, and we ...

Hi! I really liked this poem. It was really nice and had a very good flow to it. I'm not going to make this too long because you seem to ...

Heya Shinda :) I liked this chapter. I now understand why Kate and Jeffery are fighting a bit more, and what the troops want. The remaining survivors and the royal ...

Finally! YWS is back and its time to review! *rubs hands together* Okay so I agree with you, this is not the best of your chapters BUT this doesn't mean ...

Shinda! Once again you've built a lot of good suspense at the end of your chapter so now I really want to read on, but I can't :( But I ...

Okay this is interesting. I'm never usually the first person to review. I liked this chapter and finally I get to understand the connection between Kate and Jeffery. We also ...

Shinda! Well I liked this chapter. Already things are processing. I'm left wondering what their world is like and what is going on. I want to know about their connection, ...

Hey Shinda! Well I decided to read your novel from the start as I am not one to jump into things. I liked the beginning and I love how straight ...