Deanie

Hi. I thought this work was more like a short story than a poem. It didn't seem to have any poetic language or layout, so maybe it should be in ...

Hi Stargazer! I liked the idea of your friend being writing! I was glad you didn't give it away straight away, that made it more entertaining! The timing is a ...

Creativ! I absolutely loved this! It was really confusing at first, but when I got the hang of it it was so much fun to read. It put a smile ...

Hi. Hmm... I liked the idea of your poem, about new years resolutions. I did like the story of how you didn't stick to them. But your poem was a ...

Hi WritersDream! Well, this poem did put a smile on my face. I was really great to see rain put in this way. And I loved how you concluded with ...

Hi there I think this poem needs a lot more work done to it. It seemed like you were trying to think of a word that started with the correct ...

Hi Stargazer! I really liked this poem. I think of it more as a poem than a song. I think you had a very good layout and I liked how ...

Bubbly! I loved this poem! It was cute and funny and enjoyable to read. I loved the idea of a bunny Carrot Bandit, and how at the end you actually ...

Hey! I really liked this poem! It's seriously funny and enjoyable to read. It made me smile ;) Although the beginning of each new stanza did get a little bit ...

Hi. I liked your poem. It was a nice story of how someone rich fell in love with someone poor and they got judged for that. But... I was almost ...

Hi there I really liked your poem. It had a really good meaning to it and it was very understandable. Your rhyming was brilliant! I think you did a really ...

Hey Misty! I really liked this. To me it looks like it might become a short story, instead of a poem. If it is a poem then I think the ...

Hi Amy I loved this poem. It was really creepy and spooky. I loved your last two lines because it summed up the whole poem really well. I don’t know ...

Hi I thought this poem was so sad. I could feel a lot of emotion through it and the words flowed really well and fit together. It's a simple yet ...

Hi! I really liked your poem. It was really nice and very understandable. I don't like the layout you have it in, I do think that needs to be edited. ...