Deanie

I found this poem very true. Sorry doesn't mean anything any more, it's literally just a word. I love how you made that very clear in the poem. "Sorry, I ...

I really like this poem! It shows the longing of this person, and she seems to have waited such a long time she's lacking hope and angry and despair are ...

Okay... a few things with this poem. I found it really good for a start, but there were two things I am going to fuss about. One I can't stand, ...

I found this poem very interesting. It made something really boring sound really wonderful... And it takes a lot to do that! I found the imagery amazing and cannot see ...

This story is meant to be a cautionary tale which is a unrealistic and really childish poem, but there is always a moral. Think of it in the childish way... ...

This poem is so sweet! I find it really cute and I love how the counting the minutes until they see each other really makes you notice how strong their ...

I really like this poem. It was very beautiful except there was something I didn't understand. but her skin no longer hangs tightly All her petals have tore That slightly ...

I really like this poem. The description and imagery are amazing and the last line sums it up really werl. Keep Writing! :)

The plants swaying in the breeze. The birds calling for their mates. The trees whispering to each other. The wind howling to himself. The moonlight glistens on the pond. The ...

Hmm... Reading this aloud made it sound poetically beautiful but there is one problem. (Maybe its just because this poem is too complicated for my almost empty brain) but I ...

Wow! This is an amazingly deep poem, and it shows true emotions. I love your descriptive words in the first part, especially this: Loneliness is bliss, bitterness is welcomed, and ...

Hey Rubz! I just have to say I throughly enjoyed that poem and totally understand how time is very annoying to some people. I liked how the last lines tied ...

Well, this wasn't rubbish it was pretty good actually. Lyrics change depending how you sing them. I sang them slowly and they didn't sound that bad. Pretty good. (The lyrics, ...

I really like this poem. Many people write about heart break and how their heart gets destroyed or something, but this is a lovely difference to that. I cannot say ...

Wow, a very beautifully written poem. I really like it and I couldn't find a single thing wrong with it. My favourite parts are: I run through their peaceful rain ...