Deanie

Very beautiful. It flows very nicel and tells a great story. I love the title! Please, don't change it! I think it was all great, and then ending summed it ...

My heart, It bleeds for you, Until it bleeds no more. Deep down I know we never can be. So slowly, I'll fade away. But in my heart I will ...

This poem was really good. I liked how whenever she says something the guy disagrees. I don't get the thing about an old friend waiting, could you explain? I think ...

I kinda was really bored in an English lesson last year and scribbled this poem on my workbook cover. The teacher didn't mind, and now that schools over I have ...

I find this poem very deep, and very moving. I really like it. Sorry Jasmine Hart, but I don't agree with you. I like how you don't say anything about ...

“Charge!” A line of horses disappeared. Fear, immortality and then the sheer need for escape. The heartbeat, I could feel it, throbbing. I glanced at my friend, bold, brave, untouchable. ...

Yay! *Applause* awesome poem. *applause stops and then commentator turns very serious* Wow, this is an awesome poem, very deep and emotional. I really liked your way with words, and ...

Hmm... interesting poem. I think its really good... but there I two really tiny things I would change. At one point you put: and not talking to NO one, Putting ...

I find this poem very good. and I like how it is summed up really well in the end. I have to say though that the rhythm of the poem ...

Hmm...I find this poem good and amazing, but there is one thing I didn't get. But why didn't you warn me? You did, but oh, no. I didn't listen I ...

Wow. This poem is very deep... very touching. I found it beautifully written. Although it is a sad poem it is one favourites. My favourite part of the poem was: ...

I really like this poem. I like how you are swooping up so high and looking down at all the sad humans that aren't as happy is you. See a ...

I find this poem slightly confusing. It is too short. I think you need to make it longer so that the situation gets explained better and the reader can maybe ...

I'm rubbish with spelling too so now help there, but I love this poem. It flows really naturally, and it shows a great story! I love how you use slant ...

I love this poem. It was one of those poems that made me think 'I wish I had written that poem'. It was just that good! The imagery was beautiful ...