Deanie

I REALLY liked this poem. It was completely different from all the others, but it was so beautifully written. It seemesd so magical and enchanting, totally out of this world. ...

Hmmm... this poem was okay. It was good, but comparing it to your other poems it isn't as strong. I think maybe you could have done better. (I hope that ...

I liked this poem. It was shorter than your other one 'Stranger' but they were both connected at in the fact that they were about objects. I think that you ...

I like this poem. It is really well written with beautiful description. I love how you are describing where you live. First you zoom right out, so you are looking ...

Hmm... I like this poem, not as much as your others I have to say. I only have one little correction to make, and apart from that, I liked it. ...

Wow! A very interesting poem. I love how you summed it up with a question. All your poems flow so wonderfully and are so easy to read and understand. Thats ...

Wowee! Totally different type of poem. Cammie, I think you might be crazy because you are the only person who I know who wrote about a traffic light. When I ...

I love this poem! It is really good. But I only have two things to comment on. First, I am wondering what it is she did??? But your poem is ...

I really like this poem. I thought I wanted it to be longer, but it is truly perfect the way it is. I love your flow with words, and the ...

Wow! This is amazing! If only I had a talent like yours!!! Deanie x

I loved this poem so much! I was having a really terrible time and was crying and everything, and decided I need to do something. The first poem I saw ...

Very cute poem, straight from your heart. Sounds very free. I like the last verse best. It kind of relates to me and writing. Keep it up! Deanie x

This is my first story, so I really would appreciate comments or criticism. I usually write poems so this is really different. Enjoy it! I herded the sheep into the ...

Firstly I LOVE THIS POEM. It is so true. Very deep and tragic. And I have to agree, if that ever happens that will be the day humanity dies. Usually ...

Hmm... This poem confused me. I got it at first but then at the end not so much. Criticism... I have a little bit: Crows scavenge the dead crowd. Whispers, ...