Deanie

I liked this poem. It really shows how you feel about war. I like how you opened up your poem with a question, it made me want to read more. ...

Hi Blondie! I just wanted to say, a very good first chapter. I liked the way you ended it, it made me want to read more. I'm not good with ...

Hmm... what an intriguing prologue! I really liked it and it has me hooked. I want to know what happens next! I don't have anymore time to read it tonight, ...

I found this poem so pretty and sweet. It made my eyes prick with tears, literally. I didn't cry, I almost never do that in writing, but I felt like ...

I didn't know what type of poetry this is so I just put it in here! Hope you enjoy!!! All my life I've stood still watching people walk past They ...

I loved this short story. It was really beautifully written. I thought the descriptive language was great, it even reminded me of a poem. I think it was a good ...

I like this. It suits its title, and brings across a strong story. I can relate to that a lot. I mean, in a way. I'm not behind a mask ...

I love this poem. It made me smile. Its really simple but shows so much. I can't really say that much. Not a very meaningful comment, but I think it ...

Hmm... I feel kinda lukewarm about this poem. I liked it, it was short, sweet and expressed deep emotion, but something confused me. How did you feel the other persons ...

This poem is so true. It is always hard to find real friends. But I think I can tell them apart, fake and real. I am at an international school, ...

Nice poem. I was a little bit disappointed with the ending. It could be a sum up the poem a bit better I think. I only have one other little ...

I don't want a single thing to change in this poem. It is wonderful. And bears and ever so true story. People are looking at perfection as beauty, but what ...

I love this poem. It shows how life is too short. But don't just look at it as a game. It is a really deep, meanigful poem. I think you ...

This poem was short but very sweet. It shows just how much a hug can mean to someone. I didn't even notice it rhymed until I read it through a ...

Lovely poem! I like it a lot. 'kaleidoscope' I don't exactly know why but I kind of find this word funny. For some reason. (I'm just weird like that. ) ...