Deanie

Wow, this poem is so deep. I felt like crying after reading it, seriously I did. I didn't though. I just sighed really loudly. I was a little unsure of ...

One of the shortest prologues I have ever read, but I think probably my favourite. To me, it was almost like a really short poem. I loved the first two ...

Looking forward to chapter 7!!! Awaiting anxiously! I liked this chapter, a bit sudden about the change of view. Maybe at the beginning of the chapter you could put Astor's ...

I liked this chapter. I saw one mistake and there was one thing I didn't understand... What was I supposed to do now? Betray my tribe to save Astor, or ...

At first I was slightly confused, but reading further I really liked it. It showed how she was connected to Astor, which was good because I was starting to think ...

Ah, my little mystery of who was the hospital boy is solved... I'm wondering why he was in Grandfather's room now? Was he in there because they are related or ...

Wow... this writing wowed me through and through. I just love how magical you made each line sound with the beautiful description you had there. It made the imagery amazing. ...

I like this poem. I thought when beginning to read this it was going to be a poem about the morning. Maybe a beautiful sunset or something without a strong ...

I liked this chapter just as much as the other one. The only thing that amused me quite a bit was when her hope shattered. You actually put in *shatters*. ...

I really like this poem. I haven't read any of your others though. Reading this, its just got a very powerful message. From the title I just assumed it would ...

I like your flow with this poem and the repetitiveness. It was really good. I only have two little nitpicks though: The One with the fire, The One with the ...

The stars will shine tonight, Shine to dance with me. My time on earth is finally done, Together we will never be. So if with you I can never stay, ...

I like this. It's really sweet and it made me think how bad it must be for the guy proposing. From the title, I thought that the person would be ...

Hi Matthew! I love the fact that your opening verse is the same as your closure. It really adds a special touch. I liked this poem, and especially the idea ...

I really liked this poem. I didn't think it had much flow but it was kind of mysterious, very mythological. I liked that, it somehow suited the poem. I can't ...