Deanie

I love this writing. I knew what was going to happen, and because of what you wrote at the beginning I thoguht it might be a long letter of information. ...

I liked it! Not as much as your other one... but then again I'm not so good with photography so I'm just looking at the picture! Deanie x

I love this picture! Its really nice how the main focus is perfect and the rest of the image is slightly blurred. Deanie x

I love the idea you had here! I can't find any mistakes except one. I will tell you that later. But I just love how Mrac is scared at night ...

Very interesting piece. I would've liked a bit more detail. Why did he kill his son? I understand why he killed himself though. I found your use of words really ...

I loved this writing. It had a kind of flow to it. I loved how someone was asking someone questions, obviously someone more wiser than the asker. I don't have ...

I can really relate to this. My Grandpa died a while back of cancer. I always am going to miss him, but even through all his pain he still smiled ...

This poem is really straight to the point, and even though it is pretty short, it still shows so much. I love this poem! I think you did a really ...

Hi, AM I liked this piece of writing. I like the title too. I only read it because I was wondering what the title meant. I wanted to use google ...

Wow, strong poetry. I liked the repetition, for those who didn't and did make it. I loved the ending when you stated it for all those people who didn't or ...

Hey Angie! How are you??? Now the poem, which was amazing! I am actually British and not happy that tourists seem to enjoy America more than England (a prejudiced thing.) ...

Loved this just as much as I loved the prologue! The feeling and imagery there was amazing! I loved how your prologue was so nice and short and how this ...

Wow. So much emotion and depth in this poem. I could really relate as well because I recently went through a period where I felt very small and alone... I ...

I stomp my feet, I throw a tantrum I scream and yell I threaten to move out I throw the plates I smash the cups But they still won’t leave ...

I've had a bad day Had something to do with school I thought I had a best friend But instead I was his tool My dad asks to see me, ...