Deanie

I like this song. I don't usually review lyrics, and even though I have a voice like a cat being run over by a truck I tried to sing it ...

Wowee... such a beautiful story with a tragic ending. Its really long but if felt like a short story/ poem thing, but I liked it. I've never read one of ...

Hi muffins! I am glad you wrote this. I think, if Nate ever sees it he'll be really pleased to know that someone out there is missing him. I think ...

Wow, a great message to bring across. You should definitely write poems more often! I think you had a very strong beginning and end and the message was strong and ...

Wow! This poem has a really powerful message. I think we would all want to be remembered once we're gone. But as the first commenter said all the little nice ...

Wow, this is really powerful. I see no grammar mistakes, except that in the beginning paragraphs you use the word 'no one' a lot, and you put it as a ...

I like this short story. There is only on problem.. sometimes you said what was surrounding him as though the main character could see them. I don't think thats right. ...

Hi AM! This a a really short comment. I usually don't like these because they are really useless, but I just wanted you to know I love the characters you've ...

Really sad story. My eyes are fixated on the sandwiches but by the time she remembers to put her jumper on, I’d turned to smile at her -- I think ...

I think your poem is okay. I agree with the other commenter's, the poem dosen't exactly bring along what you are trying to say clearly. I think my favourite bit ...

This is a story for really little kids. It's a creation myth. I was just thinking how important it is to write not only for adults ans teens but also ...

Like the story! It was really nice, a little short but nice. I like how she has the baby but gets woken by the nurse in the room later. The ...

Nice second chapter. I liked having the viewpoint of the president. I liked how you get across the feelings on the ex-president when he finds out he is being fired. ...

Lauren is a believable character, you did a really good job. Couldn't see any mistakes, but I think you need to read through this again carefully. When you write in ...

I lied it. I can understand why Liam feels guilty that its all his fault. I lie how you started with question, what would tell an unborn child about life? ...