DeadEndsAreOptional

I don't really have anything to say bad about the story. I love how you wrote it in the perspective of the soldier and how the soldier felt about seeing ...

I like the main character so far, she seems like an interesting character. The ending makes me wonder what happened that the girl would never see her mother again, it's ...

Very good story!:) I like it, it kind of reminds me of Alice in Wonderland when Alice woke up at the end of the book. (That's a good thing). It's ...