DeadEndsAreOptional

Thank you for the review ballerina13. It was very helpful to me. :) I have just posted the second part up, if anyone wants to read it please go here:

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Thank you for the review, it's really helpful. :) I'll be sure to tell you to when I put the second part up, if you wish to read the next ...

Oh, I really enjoyed this! :) The only thing I would like to say about this is that it got me confused. Peter woke up, ate breakfast and then all ...

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I love this book so far!! It's amazing, like TigerShaard said. The plot is very interesting, I haven't read/heard about books that are taken place in Auschwitz. It's a very ...

giantslenate09 - When Marcella is hearing about Robert's death, George says 'Mr. Robert Franks past away in the line of duty on the 8th day of August.' so he is ...

It's such a great story so far! The description is wonderful, and the characters are interesting, I can't wait to read more of this story!:)

You're great at writing these intense scenes! Is this suppose to be a different version of your story 'Remembering Yesterday'? Because it has the same kind of plot and the ...

Great beginning! The way you described the attack was great, it reminds of short clips of building collapses or attacks. You made it realistic, though the fireman most likely in ...

First of all, it's a great plot but if she had a head injury I would imagine that she would be less aware of her surroundings. If she went through ...

I really like it so far. I like how you made it without a lot of description, it makes it more mysterious and made me want to read more. Since ...

Thank you for the review! I'm really glad that Marcella is becoming such an interesting character, I have fun writing in her view. I'm actually adding some of her memories ...

I might post more, it's not final what I will do yet. I like the french title chapters, that's a good idea. It's going to be in alternative perspectives, it'll ...

jasminebells: No, it's not the final title of the story. If you have suggestions for the name that would be great! BenFranks: Thank you for noticing the mistakes, I wouldn't ...