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Re: I Was There
Aww, love it! I really enjoy reading your short stories, your really good at it. I was not expecting the ending, that was a surprise but it made me like ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Book About Pirates Part 2
Thank you for the review! It helps a lot. I'll be sure to fix all my mistakes and add some more background story and description. Thanks again for your review!! ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Book About Pirates Part 2
***I'm sorry but I have currently removed this work from YWS. Due to editing and researching purposes. If you would like to read any of my other stories please go ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not Crazy
Oh my gosh! *laughs* I love it! Especially the ending. *laughs again* Perfect. :) Good Luck on the contest! ~DeadEnds
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: *Untitled* Book about Pirates
Actually, I have twist up ahead about the girl pirate thing. Hopefully it will be interesting. :) Samantha is suppose to be around twelve or thirteen. When I described Prince ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Thanks for your reviews! Megsug - Thank you so much for pointing out the time period. I didn't realize I overlapped it too much. Oops. Anyway, I'll be sure to ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: *Untitled* Book about Pirates
*** I'm sorry, but I have currently removed this work from YWS. Due to editing purposes. If you would like to read any of my other stories please go here:
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Don't Forget
Hello, snickerdooly! I really enjoy reading poetry, and reading your poem made me enjoy it even more. The verses rolled off my tongue with ease, and I've read it twice ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Hi, everyone! I just posted a preface, if you like to read it go here:
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
*** This story is deleted -for the time being. Sorry.
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Thank you for your review, Megsug! You can give me as much critique as you can, it helps me a lot. I fixed up this part of the book - ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Cartora (Chapter 1)
I really enjoyed this. It was very interesting. But the one thing that did confuse me was the person narrating. In the prologue it was Luna, but in this chapter ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Thank you for your review, destiny110! :D
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Thank you for all your reviews! It has helped me a lot . d@ydre@mer27 and ballerina13: When I re-read this part of the story, I did notice how dramatic it ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Destiny prolouge
Oh, I like! This prologue is really interesting and really...cool. :) I agree with the other reviewers, this story has potential. If you ever finish this book, please tell me. ...
Jan 31, 2011
