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Re: Will review almost anything!
If you had the time, could you please review my poem " Perplexity "? It would be much appreciated. :D Btw, I read your poem "Tightrope". Loved it. :D
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Open to Review!
Hello! I'm DeadEnds and I'm currently looking for projects to review. :) I am not an expert on grammar, for that reason I do not correct small mistakes that you ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Perplexity
Thanks for all the reviews! I wrote this poem when I was off my ADD medicine, so I was trying to describe how I felt. Thanks again for the reviews. ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Prompt Attack
Write a poem about a fairytale. Be original, make up your own fairy tale. Not a remake of a classic (Cinderella, Beauty & the Beast, Snow White, ect). Good luck! ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: My Ghost and I
Beautiful. :) I really liked this part: My past is dead And my ghost follows me You have a natural gift of writing. I can't wait to read more of ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Perplexity
Hi! This is one of my first ever poems. I hope you enjoy! :D My conscience is a swirl, in my own personal hurricane. Different voices, surround me. Their chatter, ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Name Finding Tips
I always go to it's a great site. I usually go to the "Advanced" search and fill the small form out to find the perfect name for my character. :)
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Won't You Save Me {Prologue& Chapter 1}
Hello and Welcome to YWS, LoudAndProud! I like what you have so far and I think it will become a very good book if you finish it. When I started ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: I need the advice of my fellow writers!
The 1st idea is an interesting one, and I think that would be a great story. The 2nd one could be more of a horror kind of thing or a ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Losing Touch - Introduction
I really like the idea of your story and this first part that you shared is really good. I especially like this part You can feel the punching rhythm of ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Thanks for the review! I got a whole lot of books from my library to do research but had totally forgotten to get some on the Depression. Thank you for ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chapter 1
Hey, Megsug! This was an awesome chapter. He was here. That sentence got me to sit up in my chair and read it with a different kind of urgency. Which ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: A Very... er... Sort Of Empty Review Thread
Hi, Megsug! I have *kinda* gotten out of my writer's block for Times Are Changing and I just posted the newest chapter. It would be so helpful if you read ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader (Prologue)
This was awesome! I really like the setup and plot of this story so far. Really loved the ending "Come to us, Masquerader". Love that. :) I really hope you ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
*** This story is deleted -for the time being. Sorry.
Feb 21, 2011
