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  • WRFF Archive Re: Will review almost anything!

    If you had the time, could you please review my poem " Perplexity "? It would be much appreciated. :D Btw, I read your poem "Tightrope". Loved it. :D

    Feb 26, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Open to Review!

    Hello! I'm DeadEnds and I'm currently looking for projects to review. :) I am not an expert on grammar, for that reason I do not correct small mistakes that you ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Perplexity

    Thanks for all the reviews! I wrote this poem when I was off my ADD medicine, so I was trying to describe how I felt. Thanks again for the reviews. ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Prompt Attack

    Write a poem about a fairytale. Be original, make up your own fairy tale. Not a remake of a classic (Cinderella, Beauty & the Beast, Snow White, ect). Good luck! ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: My Ghost and I

    Beautiful. :) I really liked this part: My past is dead And my ghost follows me You have a natural gift of writing. I can't wait to read more of ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Perplexity

    Hi! This is one of my first ever poems. I hope you enjoy! :D My conscience is a swirl, in my own personal hurricane. Different voices, surround me. Their chatter, ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Name Finding Tips

    I always go to it's a great site. I usually go to the "Advanced" search and fill the small form out to find the perfect name for my character. :)

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Won't You Save Me {Prologue& Chapter 1}

    Hello and Welcome to YWS, LoudAndProud! I like what you have so far and I think it will become a very good book if you finish it. When I started ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Other Re: I need the advice of my fellow writers!

    The 1st idea is an interesting one, and I think that would be a great story. The 2nd one could be more of a horror kind of thing or a ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Losing Touch - Introduction

    I really like the idea of your story and this first part that you shared is really good. I especially like this part You can feel the punching rhythm of ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: DELETED

    Thanks for the review! I got a whole lot of books from my library to do research but had totally forgotten to get some on the Depression. Thank you for ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Masquerader Chapter 1

    Hey, Megsug! This was an awesome chapter. He was here. That sentence got me to sit up in my chair and read it with a different kind of urgency. Which ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: A Very... er... Sort Of Empty Review Thread

    Hi, Megsug! I have *kinda* gotten out of my writer's block for Times Are Changing and I just posted the newest chapter. It would be so helpful if you read ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Masquerader (Prologue)

    This was awesome! I really like the setup and plot of this story so far. Really loved the ending "Come to us, Masquerader". Love that. :) I really hope you ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: DELETED

    *** This story is deleted -for the time being. Sorry.

    Feb 21, 2011


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