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Re: The Ranger
I've read all of the ranger's apprentice series and I really enjoyed them. Great book series right there.
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: 27 - Chapter One
Ok, Im back and ready to do a content review, I. Introduction I found that the intro was a bit dull and it seemed like a slight information dump on ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: 27 - Prologue
Holly Cows, Sadly there aren't any in this story, but my eyes did not move from the page at all. Usually I skip sentences or speed read on most of ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: How to be Cool
At my school this is quite right actually, also I do agree with strayrebel on the cursing part.
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Life
Hi, I'm DayDreams and hopefully I can provide you with a decent content review. As for the plot I completely unaware as to where it is going due to the ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Diary Entry 1 *rough draft*
OK, I will do a quick content review. The length of this chapter was quite short, but it seemed once again filled with the emotion to become something much longer. ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: excited for "Where The Wild Things Are?" anyone else?!
this was my favorite book as a child and I definitely plan on watching it...just after avatar
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Seven Petals -Chapter One-
Ok, cool I cant wait for the next chapter. Would you mind including/adding a separate page for a description of each character. Right now I'm lost as to who is ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by Kamas, the Comma [Closed]
Mind reviewing my script? thanks in advance I really appreciate it.
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Avatar
I've heard great things about this movie and so I decided to go see it after school sometime this week. One thing I heard about it was that it has ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Seven Petals -Chapter One-
Hey Im back, "Sure, right after this." I replied. She took a long drink from her coffee before getting up and making her way to the fridge. ^^ Does this ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Seven Petals -Prologue-
Im not really sure what to say in terms of grammer and storyline, but I do have something to say about the character developement. This is a very short, but ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: The Velvet Assassin-Prolouge
Ok, I'm not really into grammar reviews so I will just do a content review as well. First I want to agree with someone above me in saying that it ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Things come out right in the end
This is a short play I wrote for a romance play assignment. I decided to post it here so that I could get some critique for the next time I ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Sammy's (Fishr's) Photography
I love the new photos you added. My favorite is the meadow with the horses (13). The cemetery is also captured very well. Im not a fan of picture (19). ...
Jan 4, 2010
