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Re: Father
Wow, this is a very well written poem. It is about average poem length which is good, but I only wish it was longer. To me it flowed very well ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Shina ~ you are beautiful. Aqua ~ lovely face, are you European?
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Re: Would you rather?
Definitely the transformer because it is way more epic! Would you rather Drive from Philadelphia to California or Fly an airplane from Philadelphia to China
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Re: Specials - Chapter 1
Thanks empress and Ben. First, and I would like to direct this at everyone, do not think you are being overly harsh or ridiculous. I understand completely that what a ...
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Re: Would you rather?
I pick secret option C! A nerd that is still beautiful! (If i have to choose then a nerd) Would you rather watch the wiggles all day or watch dora ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)
Sounds great I cant wait to start
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Ps3, Xbox 360, or Wii?
Quite true but I thought this was to debate, and I was having fun. =)
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)
Sounds like a good storybook idea. Edit: I didn't realize someone had invisibility so I changed my power and backround. Name: Erika Night Age:14 Appearance: Five feet four inches tall. ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: An interesting question someone asked me today
I probably wouldn't know what to say. Very strange though
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Make me....I dare you
To give you something to do you can review the first chapter of specials! (other fiction)
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Ps3, Xbox 360, or Wii?
Ps3 > Xbox360 and Wii hands down. Sure initially xbox360 had a 1 year head start and microsoft's pc based systems which were a big headstart for the company. The ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Specials - Chapter 1
Hey, I am back with chapter 1. I'm assuming it felt like a long time since I posted the prologue because that always happens to me when I am waiting ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Sore Lips
Only a quick opinion. Overall I thought it was quite good, but I did have one area to critique. As no one knows I am a Christian and have been ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Prologue
The title is great, but it is lacking in content. I felt that this prologue was too short. I do understand that this could shape into a great story. The ...
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Re: Adjusting to the Dark- Chapter 2 (1st draft)
here is your review... I. Opening thoughts At first I was surprised to see that he actually went to a spy academy. His friend Matilda seemed like a very original ...
Jan 10, 2010
