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Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)
Superhuman is a superpower, like invisibility, shapeshifting...etc. Rational abilities are just things you're really good at. (i.e. amazing dancer, singer, marksman...etc.) Thank you for clearing that
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Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Aqua ~ lovely face, are you European? Haha, thank you. Yes, I'm English. :D =)
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Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)
Sorry I'm quite new what is the difference between the two?
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Re: Chupacabra
Did you draw you avatar? because if so I really like it and definitly post. I am sure plenty of people are waiting for you to post again. I know ...
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Re: hold your fire, heavens
First welcome to the forums. Next I would like to express how intriguing this poem is. This was my favorite part. hold your fire, heavens; the skies are all at ...
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Re: Swear Words Are Just Like Any Other Word?
I agree with jenna, but I do curse occasionally. Mostly like meadow when I am playing video games. I can claim I play for fun, but it still makes me ...
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Re: She
I really like longer poems and this one delivered. Not much else to say that the others didn't cover, but I would like to say keep writing because this is ...
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Re: The Banners Torn
I really couldn't go either way on this poem. At first I really liked it, but then as I kept reading I think it must have lost its rhythm. I ...
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Re: Badges or Ranks?
I was thinking about this at school and I wondered why cant we have a badge for having a story featured. For the first badge it could be one story ...
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Re: Mastering an Art
I thought it was decent enough. One positive thing I had was that it felt slightly relateble to a real life situation. My favorite thing about it was the topic ...
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Re: The Lions
I felt that the arrangement of the story was good, but it was a little to hard to read. The only lines of the poem that made me stop and ...
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Re: Chupacabra
A very interesting picture you have presented for to us. I think it is funny how you thought of the idea to draw it. The only big problems that I ...
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Re: A Dragon
I really like it! The colors you used compliment each other very nicely. The purple eye seems like it is on fire. Although he is a "nice dragon" it is ...
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Re: Where Lost Deams Go to Die
I voted in between because I didn't feel as if it was your best work. I have read a few of your other pieces and this one just didn't seem ...
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Re: what can you see
A note right now I am not very good at reviewing poetry, but I will make this quick and simple. I really liked the poem in itself, I felt each ...
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