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Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)
Erika~ I sat expressionless driving the van through the twisted streets to where the other coates were waiting. Melinda was tied up in the middle row of seats in the ...
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Re: Specials - Prologue
Thanks aqua! Sadly the games are not the main topic though...
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Re: Sweet memories
Hi, Firstly, I have seen you all over the place lately young. Well, I really liked the flow of the story. It felt smooth. My favorite thing that you expressed ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Please Listen
I am with Ruby on this one, but I would like to offer some praise. Throughout the entire poem I felt the flow of the stanzas was very good. My ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Darkness
Ok, so basically I really enjoyed this. My favorite line was: Deep blackness consuming, I know its strange to say that the first line was my favorite, but it was ...
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Re: The Truth She Told Me
I thought this was a very intiresting poem. Overall I really liked it and the theme. My favorite part was: then my broken smile, and my salty cheeks the moment ...
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Re: Project L.I.F.E
Name- Logan Target Age (12-15)- 14 Weapon: Bow and Arrows SASS: Camoflouge Fears- Fighting in a close environment becuase he cannot fight well with anything but his bow. Anything Random?- ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)
sure
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: The Raffle
*Claims for a guy* So when do we need to/can post the descriptions?
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
I really have no clue what Rangers is? maybe supposed to be something from rangers apprentice. Either way its pretty cool. 8/10
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Please! Someone save my writing!
Well, none of us here can tell you what to do. I would suggest taking a short break from writing then come back. It might help if you stay away ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Before anyone brings up problems with the featured works block, I'm just working on it. Beforehand, that little area cost over 200kb to load, which was killer on slow connections. ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Aloha from TW
Welcome, I hope you enjoy YWS as much as teenagewriters.com. I know I like the layout here a bit better. If you have written anything already why not post it ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: The Mystic Dance
This is actually quite good. I am completely unsure of where the plot is going which can be a good thing or a bad thing depending on the kind of ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Say your sin Chapter 1 part one
Ok, first a few things I would like to say. First, yay to another 14 year old writer who is good, and second I am taking latin, but I never ...
Jan 13, 2010