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Pretty darn amazing

Hi, would you please review my piece?

**After a few more posts we should end day 1? David: I turned around as I heard the doors open. There stood Luke who had a picture of distraught on ...

you get a flying carpet... to fly places -inserts coin-

Thanks for the reviews guys! Obviously if this were ever a real book the chapter would have to be so much longer. That would include probably the next two "chapters" ...

Mostly everyone focused on her, but I wanted to draw your attention to the wall behind her. The bookshelf/cabinet holding pot is tilting to the left, so I would think ...

For me it didn't seem like scribbles. The first thing that popped into my head upon looking at the drawling was some kind of map. Obviously the different colors would ...

They are pretty darn nasty (like awesome)! The first one looks like you added a red layer of the water? I don't like the part at the bottom right where ...

David: My reflexes had been instinctive. Jumping off the bed and catching her. Listening to her heart beat... it was there. "She's not dead...yet. She just passed out. We need ...

oups my bad.... I read this after posting. Could luke meet him outside after talking to me in the hall? I said that he was going to look around the ...

David: "Sorry!" I exclaimed when the boy rushed out of the room nearest to my left and bumped into me. "My bad," he said. Then I recognized him. "Your Ingrid's ...

This is very funny. Although of course it isn't a masterpiece it definitely is worth a laugh. I recently just watched new moon and found that it was an ok ...

sounds good everyone! Cool bolt I look forward to you joining

*Brian can stay in my room. I'm NOT sarcastic when it comes to the part about the year being fun. **Edit: You all posted while I typed... Assume this is ...

David: "Who wants to go to those lame introduction classes after lunch on the first day. Not me. " I muttered Looking at the card in my hand I walked ...