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I don't really need to critique because I feel the others did a phenomenal job in doing so. I just wanted to tell you how great what you've written is ...

didn't want to hear them singing the...

I have a decent list: Linkin Park One Republic Green Day Paramore We the Kings Boys like girls skillet All Time Low Dead by april ~~ I'm sure there are ...

They are quite good although so far I've only listened to a few of their songs.

*I was thinking later on Brianna could heal my leg if that is cool with you? Farix: I offered to take second watch, so that Sara could sleep through one ...

Should I post having more of the wolf things attack us or should it be something else? anyone have any opinions?

Yea Arahnia your're doing just fine, and more often then not something comes up which also hinders people from posting. I was a bit harsh...

I hate it when people join then don't post... I tried to bring Howler, Loveless, and fiction's characters into it by grouping up with them and setting them up to ...

Farix: As I awoke I could feel the sensation of warmth, and it sure felt good. The next thing I distinguished was Lucas, the boy with the big bag a ...

Sarah (Charachter name) said she was getting attacked by more than 7? and I killed all of them, and Iffy, Alexander, Fanta and I killed a few. Maybe there should ...

Farix: After the group of wolf like things had been killed Fanta, Alexander and Iffy were all catching their breath because we had done a bit of running although it ...

Good idea I think that will help structure things.

*What time of day is it? I'm just going to say dawn... It can be changed if needed. **This takes place a little ways away from where the blind girl ...

*I'll post just to move it along, but sorry it isn't very long. Daniel: Just as I was approaching the barracks I had a strange urge to go back and ...

Hey guys could you try to make longer posts later on as you learn how the other characters would react. Obviously now it's fine because you don't know how they ...