Davidmartin

I have rarely seen a poem as candid as this one, well done!!! Though there were some little details at the end, I can understand the little swear, it emphasises ...

Wow, quite a poem, it felt almost like listening to a song (you can almost imagin a travelling bard sing this on a lute) the lines had perfect continuity and ...

Hey MsBamaMeagan, quite a gem of poem you have here. The simple flow and honest expression is beautiful, it gave me the sort of feeling you get when you see ...

This argument is like a fish saying to a bird 'Hey look how deep I can dive!' and the bird replying, 'Bah! that's pointless, look how high I can fly.' ...

I don't think there has been any talk about giving 'free food' to anyone, what I meant by the trade agreements was with referance to the statement that rice is ...

Also the point Rubric made on the equality of spouses is very relevant in this argument

To Marribelle - You don't seem to have understood my points perfectly, I'm not trying to impose my principles on anyone, these are just the basic evolutionary traits the human ...

I can't really see how Polygamy is right for anyone. If you look at it a man who has several wives can never fully devote himself to anyone without upsetting ...

Hey Unkkownpoet! nice poem, it sounds a little like an early twentieth century american mafia speech, it instantly gave me the image of one of those old gangsters with a ...

I would also like to add that many companies like Monsanto add a 'terminating' gene to their crop so that the seeds produced by the crop are not viable and ...

Gandhi once said (I quote) - "The earth has enough to supply every man's needs but not enough to provide even one man's greed" With this in mind (knowing that ...

Hey Knightlyangel09, incredible poem! I love it! Honestly speaking I never thought I'd see a poem like this written again, the wording and excellent phrasing give it a sort of ...

Thanks again for your comment, but again I fear you seem to have misunderstood me. Here I used 'Yea' as more of resolution of sorts, 'yes' in this context seems ...

Hey, poet!!! I love this poem. Frankly I used to be one of those people who believe that the art of poetry is in decline, but you proved me wrong. ...

Hi! I'm David. Nice story and good choice of topics (I love Greek mythology) There's nothing wrong grammatically as far as I can see, and I really think you should ...