Davidmartin

Hey, Scar or Red! (I hope I'm right) I really liked this poem especially the softness of the narrative, for once I just couldn't find a parallel between between the ...

This sort of like a summer-day sonnet, Simple sweet and to the point. What I particularly liked about it was the way the frustration of the couple was slowly aggravated ...

I can almost hear a Parisian poet chanting this in a little cafe! Well done, I'm impressed. Though one thing I didn't like was the line 'I know, I know' ...

Hey Eraqio, brilliant poem you have here (I especially like it because it's almost as if it were written for me, I experience a lot of the same stuff!). The ...

Quite an emotional piece you've got here, it reminded me of that slow, merciless style of monologue in Robert Browning's poem 'My Last Duchess' Though the verse seems to be ...

Nice poem! It has good flow and the rhymes tie it up well. Though somehow your style doesn't seem to suit the topic, Goblins in a forest make you think ...

Hey, Amiemalamie, great story you have, a very popular topic and a strong fan base (it has the potential to become very popular very quickly). Though there were some discrepancies. ...

Here's a topic which I've always been interested in - a one world government. Many people say that the world is moving steadily to a single global nation (a governmental ...

Actually the Chinese restrict the number to no more than one child per household (that was why there was such a hubbub about the earthquake that struck a school. The ...

Thanks for your comment, Skins, I'll keep it in mind and maybe next time I'll put in a little more flow :D

You would assume all such things to be worked out as part of the 'mutual consent' so really it's a question of how well they plan their road trip and ...

Personally I agree entirely with you, but convincing people on the other side is another thing. I have never found polygamy meritorious, then again it's down to people's own choices, ...

I really don't think it could be possible, as terrible as society is (and it could get worse) there just aren't enough people who think this way to have any ...

To 'TheNewHero' - It's an interesting idea though I don't think it would work. The sight of a grieving woman is by nature much more heart rending than the sight ...

Exquisite. That is all I can think of. It's perfect, I can't think of a flaw. The way the fourth line of each verse sort of summarised the feeling of ...