Davethepenquin

Im another new kid. I've only got one thing up right now, its a poem called War. more stuff is sure to follow though. i like most genres of fiction, ...

I noticed something. Colin was angry now. He balled his hands into fists. People were watching now. Colin Flash was about to have his face smashed in, and they were ...

Very well written BadlyDrawLightning! “This is a joke right?” said Colin, exasperated. “What do you mean open a wormhole? I’m going mad, aren’t I? This is all some crazy hallucination!” ...

Fanfiction is now awesome. :D

Very nice.

I like this. I love the way your description of the lizard-guy doesn't give too much away, but is alluring and creates a clear and present antagonist. As Sandvich noted, ...

P.S. I don't understand why it is title perfection. Just sayin'

I can see how this was inspired by Touching The Void, Terraria, and Rango. I've never been stranded in such a location before, but the train of thought depicted here ...

I really enjoy this poem. The language was very strong and well used, and I found the metaphors incredibly written. The only negative would be several small grammatical mistakes, mostly ...

Thanks everyone for the positive comments; I really appreciate it. This was actually part of an English project I got back in spring. I'm thinking of writing a short(ish) story, ...

Tender bullets with their poison-tainted lips, Kiss the skins of soldiers, their flesh and bones they rip. Corpses with kissed hearts lay on the floor, Blazing guns roar around them, ...