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Re: The Dark Knight Rises discussion
I thought that it was much more of a sequel to Batman Begins rather than a sequel to The Dark Knight. What I really liked was how tightly it fitted ...
Jul 27, 2012 -
Re: The Path To Achieving Peace
:shock: Are you for real??? So - What happens if an innocent person is found guilty in court and executed? And, for someone wanting to be with someone they love ...
May 26, 2012 -
Re: Does Money Equal Happiness?
Very nice essay - It is for Geography I expect for the Human elements of Geography, like economical stuff (LEDC, MEDC, all that) and social stuff. The reason it is ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Temporal Tears
Name: Leonardo Salvesteer (sal-vest-ear) Sex: Male Age: 46 Time Period (Year): late 1990's Appearance: 5"6" with short, trimmed black hair that is greying around the edges. He has pale skin ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Batman: Arkham City Fanfic
PREDATOR Grin was nervous. He – He was coming, and Grin knew it. He could see it on the faces of his fellow prisoners. “If that freak comes near us ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Empaths - Chapter 1
Hello! This is very good. (I'm awful at reviews) Logan seems like an awesome character, in that his being kind-of depressed and wallowing in self pity/disdain is something not often ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Short Action Scene
Pretty flipping good my friend! I'm bad at writing reviews, so sorry about the following paragraph of nonsense. Its very pacey (if that's a word) and the use of a ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: 5 Haiku
Many naive people think that haikus are easy to write, but having a syllable restraint makes it harder to convey imagery that with other kinds of poems. However, AwesomeSocks, your ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Watched(expanded)
This story is awesome! I agree with catchingWave that there are a few grammatical mistakes but i really enjoyed reading this. Very Good. :D
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: He-Man: Burden of a Hero Chapter 2
10 Days earlier... In the centre of the rocky badlands, He-Man and She-Ra unsheathed their swords, ready to battle their old enemies. Thirty paces away Skeletor, and his old master ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Colin Strider Chapter Five
I must agree with Sandvich on everything he said. Maybe the phone working on a diferent planet could be an extension of one of the charecters powers. Colin can "control" ...
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: He-Man: Burden of a Hero Chapter 1
By the way, this is a 3-parter, maybe with an epilogue.
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Dead Space - Security (Chapter One and Two)
"Ill Be Back!" To read the rest! Dead Space – Security One Josef screamed and struggled, but to no avail. The man, no, creature on top of him slashed at ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: He-Man: Burden of a Hero Chapter 1
Prince Adam held the sword aloft, and pointed its golden blade at the star-filled sky. "By the power of Greyskull!" He roared Suddenly, a blinding light shone from the hilt ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Colin Strider Chapter Four
Glad to see you're keeping this novel up! Colin woke from the nightmare with perspiration dripping down every inch of his body. The dream had caused a restless sleep even ...
Jul 14, 2011
