DaughterofEvil

Hello. I'm the Princess of Evil, so this is my review for you, peasant! Your flow was mostly constant, however I would suggest for this poem to be single-spaced as ...

Wow. This poem was dark, just like the ocean you have portrayed. So to begin with, I liked the tone of this poem. I don't know, perhaps it's just me, ...

One, there is one word to describe this feeling... Endless. For me, it endlessly repeats... endlessly, my screams repeat. Your right arm tastes so sweet! It's maddening, so does your ...

Molly, I like this nonsensical song. It reminds of "Alice In Wonderland" in that respect. I think you should read the poem "maggie milly molly and may" if you do ...

As someone else said already, the flow of your song is off. Though I must say the content is pretty good. Unfortunately, I didn't like it as much since it ...

Someone already stole the critques I was going to give you. In general...I liked this poem a lot. You were really able to convey your emotions in a clear and ...

Why can't I sleep! It's nearly two A.M. And everyone can't keep their sanity. Oil is now running lower than low, And in my heart continuous flames only burn. Is ...