DaughterofEvil

"The Prisoner" At one time, at a certain place, I fell in love with a beautiful girl who lived beyond the fence. Robbed of freedom, by their hands I suffer ...

I'm not sure what the 8 line short story was, but if it was the sentences in bold, then that made for an odd ending! Anyway, I liked the message ...

OK, I made sure to review this chapter as well. First off: YAY! Character development! I thought it went a bit too fast in the first chapter, and too slow ...

I noticed some spelling errors in this chapter. To be honest, for some reason it was hard for me to keep my interest. I know the first few chapters are ...

"How did this happen?" he thought, sitting on the edge of his bed in the middle of the night. "I'm normally able to solve any problem, no matter what! ...Maybe ...

Ohohohon~ As your rival in said contest, allow me to review your work! was definitely twisty, but to be honest it wasn't that fractured. As least, in my opinion.Red Riding ...

I see your message clearly, however....there were honestly so many spelling errors that it completely distracted me from the moral of your piece. I did not like this piece for ...

"Oh…well, that's a bother." Drops rolled down Hannah's nose as she angled her face towards the sky. Zeus was at it again, she liked to think, and sure enough a ...

Ah, Lust. One of the seven Deadly/Cardinal Sins, you know. So, onto my review. I like this poem. I like it quite a bit. There's just one thing I have ...

In my mind, inner beauty is the only one which exists. Aesthetics are extremely over-rated in modern society. But regardless, onto my review. This piece was not too long and ...

Quite a good poem for just a dump. It was sad, as expected. But....I liked it because of the question that is posed to the reader. To answer those questions, ...

I needed money to get a loaf of bread. "Won't you buy some matches?" People wouldn't turn around for me... If only to freeze my hope, my body trembled in ...

Without an end, I continue circling, With nothing left but my hate, and a paralyzing agony. Slowly I forget, and my heart starts vanishing. Suddenly I see that I won't ...

I loved the suffocating feeling that your narrator has, as well as this poem. Most love poems tend to be the same old thing, but you really out-shined them and ...

To begin with, even before I read your spoiler, I knew what this poem was about. It seems that you, like most people in this world, put up a facade ...