DaughterofEvil

My apologies to everyone. I had originally meant to post this story in the fanfiction section. I apologize for any inconvienence I have caused. However....what anime series is this? I ...

Chapter 1 'I'm sorry...I'm sorry...I'm sorry...' I've been listening to that voice for a while. It sounds like it's coming from a male. At first, I felt sorry for the ...

Chapter 2 Yeah, laugh it up life. Give me an amazing morning, lull me into a false sense of security, and then pull this on me. Well life can just ...

I enjoyed your amount of imagery, however I did find several problems with this story. #1: Your "minutes to go" seemed to go by incredibly fast. She begins to think ...

Hmm...the biggest issue with this story is that you forgot your quotation marks. Although I could somewhat tell who was speaking, that's still a distraction. Also, you should not use ...

It is a bit morbid, not that I mind that sort of thing. But in general, it was also a bit..scatterbrained. In light of the fact you wrote this absentmindedly ...

Hmmm....identity crises are common these days, and I think your poem captures that nicely, if it was intended to be a song. My only note for you is that your ...

I'm relieved you included that little note before the story began, otherwise I would have been utterly lost. Truthfully, I did enjoy this story, and found nothing wrong with it ...

Ever think you're about to have one of the best days ever? You wake up early from a good sleep, the sun is shining, you go downstairs and find that ...

I definitely enjoyed this work, and was sad to see there was no "Chapter 1" after the title name. Although, there does seem to be one problem. The setting of ...

Greetings, peasant! Ohohoho! I'm here to review your work! So, I have read this piece and found a large amount of spelling and grammatical errors. This takes away from the ...

Hmmm...I can see why a title has yet to be made! You definitely pose quite a riddle to the reader with this mysterious object...I can't say anything bad about this ...

Hmm...it's rare to find a positive poem that isn't about love these days. Well, your message was positive enough. My only suggestion here would be to get rid of the ...

At some time, at some place in this immiscible world, what mixed up our two hapless worlds together was a single paper plane. I slipped out of the hospital everyday ...

I liked the topic of this poem. It almost made me think of Ms. Havisham from the novel Great Expectations by Charles Dickens. However, there were some spelling errors that ...