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Thanks for the feed back Sam. Not added: sam likes lips that resemble lamb chops... Oh yeah, Sam your eyesight is going, I treble checked all 'Amica's' have capital letters, ...

Leahweird, Thankyou very much :), and yes I did change point of view to Amica. When I do a double paraphrase that means I've changed pov. Just in case you ...

Right, now as much work as you put into this (which I respect) there were a lot of errors within this, and as a reviewer I have to be to ...

Davidchloe, the names are latin translations of words that describe the characters, if that helps in any way.

The morning brought a bitter taste to my mouth, and a painful tone to my ear as my alarm blared. I grunted as I hit my alarm, making the terrible ...

It was late evening when we landed, and a wonderful burnt orange blanket smothered the sky, with deep purple streaks slicing through it. The sensational scene was completed with the ...

The streets were cold... for a human. Well, that was what Gregory was making it look like. "How can you walk around in a short sleeved shirt like that?" he ...

Prolouge: Psylene All report to the mess hall for de-briefing and 22nd hour meal. "Hmhmhm. It's good to have psychokinesis. None of that noisy, pointless speakers rubbish". I leaned back ...

Name: Vivamus Tonitrui Position: Necromancer, Leader Gender: Male Appearance: Vivamus.jpg Personality:Dark, evil, cruel. Very quick to resort to violence, and he loves to toy with his enemies. A compl

Mercury "Look at this!". They had finally found the security outpost,the first step towards their goal. Mercury looked around to deliver a speech to the group, but then he noticed ...

Wyverus Wyverus was relieved that his and Taur's conversation had been interrupted. He didn't feel comfertable exposing his master right now, especially not when he, let alone the group, knew ...

Mercury Koron and Micah looked at Mercury, obviously in a state of panic. "What, the hell are you waiting for?!" Mercury yelled at them. He heard Koron whispering to Micah ...

It definately looks like the first one has water morphing into muffins. o_O I'm not a master of photography either, but I would fefinately say that maybe the background could ...

Wyverus Wyverus returned from the secret basement inn hid beneath it's floorboards. That was the most crudely hidden trapdoor I've ever seen... Wyverus emerged with two bottles of gin and ...

Hey peeps! I need one more person for my intergalactic raiders roleplay, 'The Nightmare Smiths' I haven't got the link 'cause my computer is acting up. Post a profile if ...