DarknecrosisX

The morning brought a sudden urge to my body, a plea for appeasement, for death. I had spent the whole night focusing my aura into meditation, trying to hone my ...

Firstly Mad Dog, no swearing, especially not on my novel, so edit your post or I will... yeah, you get the picture. Secondly, the letter was reporting Umbrim to the ...

Cool, Pm me your profile. Thanks! DNX :J

To Betheny, which huntress? bronze-age or golden-age. P.s Bronze age=good Gold age=bad Thanks DNX :J

A lovely second chapter to your novel! Well done! Still lacking a description of Aaron though, and you almost fooled me into telling you how to count, until I realised ...

Gotham City has been under the protection for many years, by the dark knight, Bruce Wayne; AKA Batman. But now, the Joker has another evil scheme which could change Gotham ...

Well... this is a very optimistic poem... Welcome to YWS by the way! A nice piece of quick poetry, giving a warning to the danger of driving when you're sleepy... ...

Wow, this is a nice piece of poetry! :) Nitpicks: 1. "your" not sure if you should use speech marks, personally I would use ' ' instead. 2. Cold isolation ...

Wyverus "Finally, I thought this time would never come" Wyverus laughed, as the soldiers began the assault. He quickly used a shrowd to shift to the behind of the legion. ...

No, what he said was: Regardless, this was definately not my last stop, no doubt this new detective was right on my trail. I wasn't planning to stay long in ...

Wyverus The Werelion lead the way, even though Wyverus could detect every noticeable organism in 4 miles. This state he was in, it was volatile and overpowered, but it was ...

"What, are you waiting for? Get to your stations!" I ordered. "No, wait, hold that command. First, Cytana, I need to talk to you, and Cathar, you can return to ...

Leahweird, he is on the run because he murdered 63 people, that's not leagal, not in the Immortal world.

The plane hit the ground with a heavy thud. It made Gregory jump out of his deep sleep, and almost his skin. I gazed out of the window, the powder ...

Nice piece of poetry, I like it :) One nitpick: As much as I loved the poem, I saw no connection towards the title, even in a metaphorical sense. Oh, ...