Darkhalm7_Melissa

Mistakes here and there. Also I didn't really grasp the concept. The whole thing was just confusing. Sorry. Please PM me when it's redone. D7M

I must say it was very touching. Although you are missing words and have misspellings. Also it's broken here and there. The story just doesn't seem to flow. Correct then ...

Oh God that was touching...Reminds me of my last relationship. I still have feelings for him... Never the less just like Time we must move on with it! I hope ...

Wow. This was touching. I'm usually bad at grasping concepts but you made this so simple yet complicated at the same time...Beautiful. D7M :D

This was great! Anymore words to describe it? Of course yet to many to list! God I just started here and I already love this stuff! D7M :D :D :D

Hmmm...I agree with Shadow Theif. This definetly wasn't as good as the first one. Ah well. That is just an opinion on the matter...With as many reviews as you have ...

I must say this was an exhilarating piece! Excuse me if I spelled that wrong...Any mistakes I believed have been covered by those before me. I look forward to reading ...

Hmmmm...This is pretty good...I'm just not getting the plot very well. You might want to go over this to make things run a bit smoother 'kay? I still look forward ...

I like this version better than Hidden Secrets. But by the way I think thing will turn out. Use the title as a sequel one. You had a couple of ...

OMG Theif! It's been so long since I've got contact to you! You had a mistake here... "She is in Hurricane's care father, do not worry." said the night who ...

Um...I guess I'll agree with the others. But I must say...I was to caught up in the story to pay any attention to the grammar. It was that good. So ...

Any more? I though that was good. Although you did have a few grammar mistakes. If you look your work over you'll be sure to find them D7M

This was pretty good! But you do have some errors... Pm me as soon as you can get your stuff updated. Also, read this aloud. YOu can miss stuff when ...

Whoa. That. Was. Good. Please write more. I'm begging you! And no spelling mistakes that I could see! Sweet! D7M

Hey that was really good. I'm just a newbie but when I start getting better at reveiws PM and I'll look at any other work you got. :) D7M