DarkerSarah

You created some very beautiful imagery with this. My problem lies with the disconnected words: Told the dream about the castle garden music and leather Leather doesn't fit. It shouldn't ...

Oooh...this was good. I liked it. It's kind of poetic, with the rythmic scrubbing (which is one of my favorite parts.) I can tell you are a poet. First off, ...

Ick...the Vines, by far The Vines vs. The Hives (couldn't resist)

I mean, when will you realize you can’t change the world? When will reality shatter your fragile glasshouse and make you bleed, so poetically, over white carpet and hidden red ...

Is it a fiction based on fact, or nonfiction? I love history, so either way, it sounds interesting. Unless it's not very well written, like the Da Vinci Code.

If you didn't read the first two parts of my story, you might want to read them: Part I and Part II It is not necessary to read them, but ...

Overall, I like this. I do have a few suggestions for you, though. Firstly, I think you tried to cram too many physical descriptions into this short work. "Ebony hair" ...

Maroon 5 because I'm not that big of a punk rock fan. Maroon 5 vs. Led Zeppelin

The opening line does not do the rest of the world justice. "smiling is the world's language" Though I agree with the concept it seems too "nice" for the rest ...

"We constantly cast the lure of expectation ahead of us hoping to hook a desired piece of the future. SOmething unimaginable always takes the bait" - Dee Hock I got ...

My conscience is what prevents me from committing crimes. I can't speak for others, though. It doesn't seem to, because we have so much crime in America. But I imagine ...

the Hunchback of Notre Dame (Go Achilles!!) Is this a joke or did you get just get the name wrong? No, it's the name of Phoebus's horse, lol. You know, ...

I saw Million Dollar Baby last night. Amazing . I didn't see any of the other Oscar nominated films for Best Picture, but I can see how that won. It ...

Michael Jackson's actions are in no way justifiable. I do, however, have deep sympathy for him. Something's desperately wrong with him, and instead of either accusing him or taking up ...

-Cult followers of Quentin Tarentino -Agnostics -Apathy -Selfishness -Kids who are emo all the time -Teenagers -Net speak (u r 2 kewl want 2 doo sumtin sumtym?)